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  • On the one hand, sentencing to prison is not appropraite for minor crime`s offenders.Staying in prison will not change their mind and character.
  • In this case it would be better to sentence them to social servis works that may be more useful for the community.
  • On the other hand, the offenders convicted for felonies should stay away from the society.
  • Take, for instance, drug distributors who should stay in prison in order to prevent them from selling drugs to young children, or serial killers who are dangerous for the community.

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    • On the one hand, sentencing to prison is not appropraite for minor crime`s offenders.Staying in prison will not change their mind and character.
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    • In this case it would be better to sentence them to social servis works that may be more useful for the community.
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    • Take, for instance, drug distributors who should stay in prison in order to prevent them from selling drugs to young children, or serial killers who are dangerous for the community.
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