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  • Past tenses.

  • It was dark when he opened his eyes.
  • The ochre landscape and his glitter powder, subtly deposited by sunlight, had died when his eyes closed.
  • And now there was nothing anymore.
  • Nothing more than meandering memories almost erased and tarnished colors of old pictures.
  • Behind the window was emerging the urbanized stretch of a landing strip and, on macadam, halos of light, which was outlining his edge, was ominously reflecting. He shivered.
  • He didn’t know how long the plane had stopped.
  • But he knew it was cold, horribly cold.
  • He clumsily pulled up his legs against his chest and wrapped them with the too large sweater from her shoulders.
  • Worn fibers emitted a stifled snap before stretched more.
  • His forehead mechanically leaned on the little window and he pulled his arms in his sleeves.
  • He could hear his mother scold in the prevailing silence.
  • She had never tolerated this habit he had to deform his clothes.
  • And she shouted: “a sweater, a beautiful sweater!
  • Do you know what’s the price of a sweater today?
  • Perhaps you’ll pay the new one I’ll have to buy for you?!
  • One day, this kid will kill me!
  • And sit up properly!
  • I haven’t educated you like that.” A yawn unhinged his jaw. Never mind.
  • She wasn’t here to say something tonight.

ΠΑΡΑΚΑΛΟΥΜΕ, ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΚΑΘΕ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΗ! - English