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One time, I was in the bus, went to Rio de Janeiro, and a women started yell, so I turned my head and her son was borning.
The bus stoped and the peoples are there called to ambulence, after she went to hospital.

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- One time, I was in the bus, went to Rio de Janeiro, and a women started yell, so I turned my head and her son was borning.
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- The bus stoped and the peoples are there called to ambulence, after she went to hospital.
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