添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

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  • collision

  • The ship collided with an iceberg and started to sink shortly afterwards.
  • The captain gave the order to abandon ship.
  • Fortunately the crew and all the passengers aboard were saved and stayed alive.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English