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  • a visit of Paris

  • i know good places in Paris and I woul like to share with you !
  • it is your first time in Paris, you are going to visit Eiffel Tower, Le Louvre, Montmartre...but it exist many others amazing places.
  • For example, you can go to the banks of Seine, specially on the Quai Saint Bernard. in fact, you will discover 3 amphiteaters where you can listen some music or to dance ! you can be partcipate if you are a musician. it is a very good area for the people who want to see the crazy parisians nights.
  • in the other way, you can go to walk on the Coulée Verte, it is a green promenade in Paris between Vincennes and Bastille !
  • so i hope i have helped you in the disocver in Paris the sequel in the next episode :)

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    • it is your first time in Paris, you are going to visit Eiffel Tower, Le Louvre, Montmartre...but it exist many others amazing places.
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    • For example, you can go to the banks of Seine, specially on the Quai Saint Bernard. in fact, you will discover 3 amphiteaters where you can listen some music or to dance ! you can be partcipate if you are a musician. it is a very good area for the people who want to see the crazy parisians nights.
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    • in the other way, you can go to walk on the Coulée Verte, it is a green promenade in Paris between Vincennes and Bastille !
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