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my first time in polyglot
Hy,everybody.
My name is Massimo and this is my first time in Polyglot.
I want to improve my English, and I can help others who want to learn Italian.
I Like reading, and computer.
I'm married and I've got a wonderful boy.He's twelve.
Today he has finished school and He is very happy because now can play all day long without worryng to study or doing homework.
Lucky him, I have to work and the holiday will start in a couple of month.
best regards Massimo

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- my first time in polyglot
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- Hy,everybody.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- My name is Massimo and this is my first time in Polyglot.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I want to improve my English, and I can help others who want to learn Italian.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I Like reading, and computer.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- I'm married and I've got a wonderful boy.He's twelve.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- Today he has finished school and He is very happy because now can play all day long without worryng to study or doing homework.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- Lucky him, I have to work and the holiday will start in a couple of month.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
문장 8
- best regards Massimo
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8