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Teks daripada Nemo4ka - English

I need help
Hi everybody! I need help.
I need to practise English and it is desirable to get in touch with those people, whose native language is English.
But is is better and not necessarily, may be somebody else will help me to practice English. Thanks a lot!

Title
- I need help
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Hi everybody! I need help.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I need to practise English and it is desirable to get in touch with those people, whose native language is English.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- But is is better and not necessarily, may be somebody else will help me to practice English. Thanks a lot!
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3