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Text from ogurlek1 - English

  • Being in Medicine field from My outlooking

  • How did I choose Medicine ?
  • When i was at high school, My father convinced to me for choosing medicine.He did instructions about medicine rationally,spooke of with me on negative and positive side of medicine.
  • Then I decided to select my job is Medicine.
  • Positive and Negative sides of being in Medicine field in Turkey.
  • There is a little detail in Turkey but I think it's very important.A lot of young people who finished your university can not find business about their fields.There are too many people who was graduated and most of these are unemployed.All of these are based on our terrible education systems in every fields and excess of our population.
  • Alonngside of these sektor of health needs work forces in next 30 years.Because inhabitant increases day by day and people ask for better health's opportunities.
  • In the other hand Doctor's wages are better according to Turkey standarts and If you are doctor , You have warrent of government.But i can not say same positive sides about business safety.
  • Violence at Health field has come true in last 5 years so The number of hospital personals (including most doctors) increased who are killed by patient's relative in our country.Unfortunately it is disappointing situation.
  • Our Health ministry didnt provide and didn't protect their doctors.On the contrary They got new sanctions that support to patients and their relatives about this subject.
  • Thanks for reading :)

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    • When i was at high school, My father convinced to me for choosing medicine.He did instructions about medicine rationally,spooke of with me on negative and positive side of medicine.
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    • There is a little detail in Turkey but I think it's very important.A lot of young people who finished your university can not find business about their fields.There are too many people who was graduated and most of these are unemployed.All of these are based on our terrible education systems in every fields and excess of our population.
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  • Sentence 6
    • Alonngside of these sektor of health needs work forces in next 30 years.Because inhabitant increases day by day and people ask for better health's opportunities.
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  • Sentence 7
    • In the other hand Doctor's wages are better according to Turkey standarts and If you are doctor , You have warrent of government.But i can not say same positive sides about business safety.
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  • Sentence 8
    • Violence at Health field has come true in last 5 years so The number of hospital personals (including most doctors) increased who are killed by patient's relative in our country.Unfortunately it is disappointing situation.
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  • Sentence 9
    • Our Health ministry didnt provide and didn't protect their doctors.On the contrary They got new sanctions that support to patients and their relatives about this subject.
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