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Hey! I learn English, could you help me? I can teach Russian.
Hey!
I am 22 year old.
I am a student.
I learn Computer Science, Programming, Networks.
So, I like cycling, ice skating and play on guitar.
I has begun learning English few years ago but haven't reached desired successful.
Could you help me?

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- Hey! I learn English, could you help me? I can teach Russian.
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- Hey!
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- I am 22 year old.
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- I am a student.
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- I learn Computer Science, Programming, Networks.
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- So, I like cycling, ice skating and play on guitar.
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- I has begun learning English few years ago but haven't reached desired successful.
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- Could you help me?
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