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Help me !!
Hi guys I'm a Vietnamese girl.
I'm 20 years old.
I want to learn English and I can teach you Vietnamese.
In addition, I want to make friends with everybody and looking for my lover. ^^

meomeo94June 2014100% GOOD (2 votes)
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- Help me !!
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句子 1
- Hi guys I'm a Vietnamese girl.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm 20 years old.
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句子 3
- I want to learn English and I can teach you Vietnamese.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- In addition, I want to make friends with everybody and looking for my lover. ^^
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4