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  • Hello my dearest friend How are you doing?
  • I hope you feel better and your swelling of the face will go away I have just come come with Lera, we were walking although it is cold outside.
  • Today in the morning the temperature range from 7 to 9 C I had he felling that summer finished and soon we will have winter with snow , I put all my warm clothe up in the shelf and plus there is so much stuff that to take it out in the morning when I was going to work would be time -consuming.
  • So I had to take a jacket and I got cold.
  • Recently, I have some problems I guess with health- my hands are quivering ( the words I learn from Of Mice and Men)))( I think I have a tremor) and when we have had a medical check up the doctor dint like how my heart was thumbing She said nothing serious but I must check my thyroid glads as she said i have a like a lump in my neck.
  • That's all for now I hope my letter finds you in mirth Please take good care of yourselves

TOLONG, BANTUANNYA UNTUK MEMBENARKAN SETIAP KALIMAT! - English

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    • I hope you feel better and your swelling of the face will go away I have just come come with Lera, we were walking although it is cold outside.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
  • Kalimat 3
    • Today in the morning the temperature range from 7 to 9 C I had he felling that summer finished and soon we will have winter with snow , I put all my warm clothe up in the shelf and plus there is so much stuff that to take it out in the morning when I was going to work would be time -consuming.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3
  • Kalimat 4
  • Kalimat 5
    • Recently, I have some problems I guess with health- my hands are quivering ( the words I learn from Of Mice and Men)))( I think I have a tremor) and when we have had a medical check up the doctor dint like how my heart was thumbing She said nothing serious but I must check my thyroid glads as she said i have a like a lump in my neck.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5
  • Kalimat 6