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Hi, my name is Liliya, I'm 20 and I'm from Russia.
I'm student and I learn English about 8 years.
I like traveling, meeting new friend all over the world.
I love rock music, reading books and history.
My dream is to visit Scotland one day and I really want to learn Scottish gaelic.

Lilya1994June 2014100% GOOD (2 votes)
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- Hi, my name is Liliya, I'm 20 and I'm from Russia.
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句子 2
- I'm student and I learn English about 8 years.
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句子 3
- I like traveling, meeting new friend all over the world.
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句子 4
- I love rock music, reading books and history.
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句子 5
- My dream is to visit Scotland one day and I really want to learn Scottish gaelic.
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