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"SweetEmotionArt" is it useful?
Dear friends.
I need you help.
I'm an artist, and going to open on-line shop.
I'm hardly trying to find the name of the shop.
The last that, I've created))) was "SweetEmotionArt" So on, very need your advises.
Is it correct in English? Normal?
Or some kind of stupid things as our people have in menus, for example "roast language"))) It would be so kind of you, to correct me.

Judul
- "SweetEmotionArt" is it useful?
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Judul
Kalimat 1
- Dear friends.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
Kalimat 2
- I need you help.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
Kalimat 3
- I'm an artist, and going to open on-line shop.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3
Kalimat 4
- I'm hardly trying to find the name of the shop.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4
Kalimat 5
- The last that, I've created))) was "SweetEmotionArt" So on, very need your advises.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5
Kalimat 6
- Is it correct in English? Normal?
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 6
Kalimat 7
- Or some kind of stupid things as our people have in menus, for example "roast language"))) It would be so kind of you, to correct me.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 7