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  • Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with my accommodation problems.
  • As I am facing many problems with student who share accommodation with me, I would like to summarize it as the following: Firstly,as he comes from a warm area in contrast with me,he likes to keep air conditioner at lowest degree which make me feel uncomfortable with.
  • Secondly,as he is studying music and me mathematics,he needs to keep training on his instruments with his colleagues which made me unable to focus on my studies due to high volume of instruments and interruptions.
  • Thirdly,as I mentioned before he speaks different language than me,that is make impossible to communicate with him in proper way.
  • Finally,I prefer to get another accommodation that could solve these problems at the earliest,so I can get focused on my lessons.
  • Sincerely, Ahmad

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  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • As I am facing many problems with student who share accommodation with me, I would like to summarize it as the following: Firstly,as he comes from a warm area in contrast with me,he likes to keep air conditioner at lowest degree which make me feel uncomfortable with.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • Secondly,as he is studying music and me mathematics,he needs to keep training on his instruments with his colleagues which made me unable to focus on my studies due to high volume of instruments and interruptions.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Thirdly,as I mentioned before he speaks different language than me,that is make impossible to communicate with him in proper way.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Finally,I prefer to get another accommodation that could solve these problems at the earliest,so I can get focused on my lessons.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6