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  • Advertisement essay

  • First of all advertising telling us about something new like products, services and many other staffs, in order to purchase it.
  • So the purpose of advertising is selling as much as possible, and to get that goal, most of these companies (producers of these products and services) hire specialized companies in advertising and marketing to create such marketing strategy, and then the measurement of success of this marketing strategy which reflect marketing company success in first place and then service producer company is how much they are able to sell!.
  • Depending on this introduction we have to say that the man engine for advertisement is getting higher income for the companies, so these companies keep advertising and telling us what they have new.
  • Due to, they are focusing on the positive side of their products and services, and in general they hide negative side of these products and services, to encourages us to buy it even we did not really need, which considered as a disadvantage of these advertising campaign.
  • In contrast, sometimes we was looking for something to buy it like a car, so we start looking into the current advertising campaign to get knows what car producers are offering these days m and start comparing between their offers, to be able to judge and choose which car brand is better for us to bought it, which considered as an advantage for advertising.
  • In conclusion, and as we see advertising has to sides, good and bad.
  • It is depends on consumer culture and consumer habits.
  • If we have a good consumer culture we will not go and buy something we did not need it, and if else we will do that.
  • One of these consumer culture concepts is before you went for shopping you should have a written purchasing list for what you are going to shopping, if you wish to resist such companies advertisements that who encourage you to purchase something you are really do not need.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Titolo
  • Frazo 1
    • First of all advertising telling us about something new like products, services and many other staffs, in order to purchase it.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • So the purpose of advertising is selling as much as possible, and to get that goal, most of these companies (producers of these products and services) hire specialized companies in advertising and marketing to create such marketing strategy, and then the measurement of success of this marketing strategy which reflect marketing company success in first place and then service producer company is how much they are able to sell!.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • Depending on this introduction we have to say that the man engine for advertisement is getting higher income for the companies, so these companies keep advertising and telling us what they have new.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • Due to, they are focusing on the positive side of their products and services, and in general they hide negative side of these products and services, to encourages us to buy it even we did not really need, which considered as a disadvantage of these advertising campaign.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • In contrast, sometimes we was looking for something to buy it like a car, so we start looking into the current advertising campaign to get knows what car producers are offering these days m and start comparing between their offers, to be able to judge and choose which car brand is better for us to bought it, which considered as an advantage for advertising.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • If we have a good consumer culture we will not go and buy something we did not need it, and if else we will do that.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • One of these consumer culture concepts is before you went for shopping you should have a written purchasing list for what you are going to shopping, if you wish to resist such companies advertisements that who encourage you to purchase something you are really do not need.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9