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hi,I would like to present a song on my blog, could you correct
It's the opera song sang at the end of the movie Grace Of Monaco It's very beautiful, thanks to Internet, People told me the song's name.
Here it's a version sing sung by a beauty.
Thank you for you time!

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- hi,I would like to present a song on my blog, could you correct
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句子 1
- It's the opera song sang at the end of the movie Grace Of Monaco It's very beautiful, thanks to Internet, People told me the song's name.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Here it's a version sing sung by a beauty.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Thank you for you time!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3