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End of school year
Hi !
Today I have ended the school year with good results, now I will have more time for practice English and enjoy the summer, I'm happy to have the reward of the effort.

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标题
- End of school year
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi !
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Today I have ended the school year with good results, now I will have more time for practice English and enjoy the summer, I'm happy to have the reward of the effort.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2