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  • Furthermore, I have realized daily that the commercial and relational parts of an architecture firm were almost ubiquitous as private practice.
  • Private practice, in contrast with salaried which corresponds to the first year internship has been another powerful motivating factor in the daily discovery of the profession, its advantages and its risks.
  • Throughout this internship, supported by the architects "" and "" within this architecture firm which is situated in the "" I have lived an insular architect life, answering to future bulding owners, private or public, from the information gathering to the end project delivery.

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    • Furthermore, I have realized daily that the commercial and relational parts of an architecture firm were almost ubiquitous as private practice.
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    • Private practice, in contrast with salaried which corresponds to the first year internship has been another powerful motivating factor in the daily discovery of the profession, its advantages and its risks.
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    • Throughout this internship, supported by the architects "" and "" within this architecture firm which is situated in the "" I have lived an insular architect life, answering to future bulding owners, private or public, from the information gathering to the end project delivery.
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