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Text from Rosabela - English

  • Holidays

  • Dear Cristina, Sorry for not writing before but I´ve been very busy with my exams.
  • I have to tell you about my last weekend.
  • The last weekend was amazing and fantastic!
  • I travelled with my friends to Granada where there is a water park .
  • I have to tell that it was a good opportunity to pass some time enjoying and swimming in the swimming pools.
  • When we arrived, we had breakfast and later, we began to swim in a enormous swimming pool.
  • Furthermore, there were many attractions in the park and a lot of space to take a sunbathe.
  • On the other hand, the weather was really good, because the temperatures were very soft.
  • Moreover, people was very polite with us and we felt as in home.
  • So that, if you want a special and funny day, you will go to this water park.
  • Well, that´s all for now.
  • I hope that you come with us the next time.
  • We will enjoy a lot!
  • All the best, Rosabela

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