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The temperature in Tokyo now is very comfortable, though there are some hot days at time.

The highest temperature is around 25 degrees Celcius, and the lowest is around 20.

But it is gradually getting higher and higher in these season.

The highest temperature in the hottest days in a year here is around 38 degree!

It's also humid in summer, so everyone suffer from the heat!

So we eat shaved ice to cool down.

There are a lot of flavors of shaved ice.

Strawberry, melon, matcha(green tea), ume plum...

Fruits like watermelon are also cool me down in summer, but I like shaved ice the most!

たまに暑い日もあるけど、今の東京の気温はとても快適。 最高気温は大体25度くらいで、最低気温は20度くらい。 でも今の時期は、だんだん気温が上がってきてる。 一年で一番暑い時期の最高気温は大体38度くらいにもなるんだよ！ 夏は湿度も高いので、みんな夏バテしちゃう。 だから私達はかき氷をたべる。 かき氷には色んな味がある。 イチゴ、メロン、抹茶、梅…。 夏はスイカとかの果物を食べるのも涼しくていいけど、私はかき氷が一番好きだな！