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World Cup
Rio de Janeiro has been occupied by lots of tourists.
They come from different places of the World, and are generally trying to have fun in this amazing city.
As Rio is a very expensive city for one to live in, the hosting prices are almost absurd.
I have been trying to help tourists whenever possible so that they do not stroll around dangerous places or get tricked by mal intentioned salespeople.
Whoever is in town and want to hang out feel free to invite me.
Thank you for correcting me.

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- Rio de Janeiro has been occupied by lots of tourists.
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- They come from different places of the World, and are generally trying to have fun in this amazing city.
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- As Rio is a very expensive city for one to live in, the hosting prices are almost absurd.
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- I have been trying to help tourists whenever possible so that they do not stroll around dangerous places or get tricked by mal intentioned salespeople.
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- Whoever is in town and want to hang out feel free to invite me.
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- Thank you for correcting me.
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