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Revolution in working space..
As a rule, it's uncommon to have work at home in my country.
According to the common meaning of job, if we work, we have to commute to our working place, communicate with our stuff, have some workin sheduele...
But, nowadays, we can see, that the amount of distance jobs are increasing.
A lot of trading companies want their employees work at home.
May be such revolution in working sphere has its advantages, but I ought to mention, that i don't like it..
Of course, it's only my personal point of view.

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- As a rule, it's uncommon to have work at home in my country.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- According to the common meaning of job, if we work, we have to commute to our working place, communicate with our stuff, have some workin sheduele...
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- But, nowadays, we can see, that the amount of distance jobs are increasing.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- A lot of trading companies want their employees work at home.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- May be such revolution in working sphere has its advantages, but I ought to mention, that i don't like it..
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- Of course, it's only my personal point of view.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6