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  • July 2nd

  • Today my brother bet me to pick up me, but after it, he double the bet and he lost, now he owe me money and pick up me.
  • Today everybody said to me: when you are sleep (fainting) you are so quiet, after you talk in others languages, but I don't remember :C.
  • When I came back home, I saw from the garden through the window my friends and ma copine, my neighbour and my family blew the globes and see happy faces.
  • I still without force, in the morning I've broken a crystal glass, but my mommy understood myself and she don't get angry.

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  • 문장 1
    • Today my brother bet me to pick up me, but after it, he double the bet and he lost, now he owe me money and pick up me.
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  • 문장 2
    • Today everybody said to me: when you are sleep (fainting) you are so quiet, after you talk in others languages, but I don't remember :C.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
  • 문장 3
    • When I came back home, I saw from the garden through the window my friends and ma copine, my neighbour and my family blew the globes and see happy faces.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
  • 문장 4
    • I still without force, in the morning I've broken a crystal glass, but my mommy understood myself and she don't get angry.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4