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Text from Dmytro-Sytro - English

  • Why I choose to be a desiner

  • Also the main reason why i chose this profession was the desire to change (transform) Ukrainian street fashion.
  • Women of our country (are very beautiful) are known to be beautiful( attractive ) and tend to wear bright and colorful clothes and unfortunately they have not always enough taste to choose and combine things (but not always be able to create a attractive and balanced outfit ) .
  • Although Ukrainian fashion industry is quite young the popular reading on this topic is not enough , traditionally prevail magazines .
  • Blogging that generates and brings trend in to general usage , only starts to develop.
  • The things , what popular in the West , comes to our country after about six month or a year .There exist the precise concept of trend , this applies to color,form and decor of the costume .
  • In the future trends will be regularly refreshed( constantly updated) as well as new materials , shapes ,colour combinations and designs .
  • But I (aspire) seek for in to create comfortable and high quality , and the same time stylish clothes out of time and geographic (spase))) , that could be wear(ed ?) a few seasons in a row .
  • I also think that clothes must not be just convenient (commodious) or just sightly , but also it must combine both qualities , that the consumer ( client ) would feel himself comfortable in it .
  • Anythin can bring me inspiration in the process of the creating sketch.
  • A most of time it people around me ,sometimes it can be materials or texture .
  • But to being a clothe designer is no so simple, that a lot of people think , not enought to understand the fashion ,to be able to paint and sew , but also it ability to feel human wishes , their deepest purpesis(?) and know their necessities The Fashion is closely connected with Fine art, music, theater, and all of art in general (and in general with all of art) ?

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    • Women of our country (are very beautiful) are known to be beautiful( attractive ) and tend to wear bright and colorful clothes and unfortunately they have not always enough taste to choose and combine things (but not always be able to create a attractive and balanced outfit ) .
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    • Although Ukrainian fashion industry is quite young the popular reading on this topic is not enough , traditionally prevail magazines .
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    • The things , what popular in the West , comes to our country after about six month or a year .There exist the precise concept of trend , this applies to color,form and decor of the costume .
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    • In the future trends will be regularly refreshed( constantly updated) as well as new materials , shapes ,colour combinations and designs .
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    • But I (aspire) seek for in to create comfortable and high quality , and the same time stylish clothes out of time and geographic (spase))) , that could be wear(ed ?) a few seasons in a row .
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    • I also think that clothes must not be just convenient (commodious) or just sightly , but also it must combine both qualities , that the consumer ( client ) would feel himself comfortable in it .
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    • But to being a clothe designer is no so simple, that a lot of people think , not enought to understand the fashion ,to be able to paint and sew , but also it ability to feel human wishes , their deepest purpesis(?) and know their necessities The Fashion is closely connected with Fine art, music, theater, and all of art in general (and in general with all of art) ?
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