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Hello!
Hello!
I'm Celeste,I'm 16 years-old and I'm Italian.
I like football very much, my favourite team is Milan.
I go to swimming pool on Monday and Wednesday.
I'd like to improve my English.

Celeste97February 2013100% GOOD (2 votes)
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