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The Monologue 1
Lately, I watched movies on Youtube.
As a rule, it is interviews with different people, for example, Alexander Gordon.
In one of them Alexander told the interviewer about when he decided to quit smoking.
It was when he was still living in America.
In short, he quit and he gained twenty kilograms in weight.
So he asked his familiar doctor whether it is worse to smoke or to be fat.
And his friend replied that it would be better if he was smoking.
So, Alexander started to smoke again and lost twenty kilograms.

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- The Monologue 1
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- Lately, I watched movies on Youtube.
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- As a rule, it is interviews with different people, for example, Alexander Gordon.
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문장 3
- In one of them Alexander told the interviewer about when he decided to quit smoking.
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- It was when he was still living in America.
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문장 5
- In short, he quit and he gained twenty kilograms in weight.
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문장 6
- So he asked his familiar doctor whether it is worse to smoke or to be fat.
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문장 7
- And his friend replied that it would be better if he was smoking.
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- So, Alexander started to smoke again and lost twenty kilograms.
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