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  • The Monologue 2

  • At the time of the Soviet Union, the government sought for there to be zero unemployment.
  • For this reason, there were a lot of people who could do nothing on his job.
  • At the same time they couldn't be unemployed, because people who don't work for six months or more were guilty of committing a crime.
  • Besides, in Soviet Union there were no unemployment benefits.
  • It is believed that it was dishonest for people to go to work every day when they were not needed there.
  • So they couldn't spend their time for their deals. I don't agree.
  • I think this is a very small price for the things they were given, and they should be happy that they had a dwelling, they had hot and cold water, central heating, food and access to medical care.
  • And they had to just go to work every day for this.
  • Very often, we don't understand the value of these simple benefits.
  • In the Middle Ages, people were almost toothless at twenty years old, there was very high infant mortality, even reach people could die because of disease, which treated outpatiently now.
  • People were considered to be at an elderly at thirty, and were thought to be advanced age at forty five.
  • And, for example, in Russia, up until 1917, eight out of every hundred years were hungry with mass death of people because of stravation.
  • So, I believe that simple work every day is a small price for the things which the Soviet people had.

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    • At the same time they couldn't be unemployed, because people who don't work for six months or more were guilty of committing a crime.
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    • It is believed that it was dishonest for people to go to work every day when they were not needed there.
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    • I think this is a very small price for the things they were given, and they should be happy that they had a dwelling, they had hot and cold water, central heating, food and access to medical care.
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    • In the Middle Ages, people were almost toothless at twenty years old, there was very high infant mortality, even reach people could die because of disease, which treated outpatiently now.
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    • And, for example, in Russia, up until 1917, eight out of every hundred years were hungry with mass death of people because of stravation.
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