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I want to add this English text to my website "architect design".
Would you please tell me if it is correct? Thank you!
________________________________________________________ The premise is based on underlying aim of mixing keen analyses and formal experimentation as diverse of design.

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- I want to add this English text to my website "architect design".
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- Would you please tell me if it is correct? Thank you!
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
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- ________________________________________________________ The premise is based on underlying aim of mixing keen analyses and formal experimentation as diverse of design.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3