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love drawing
Today I drew a very beautiful picture.
Everybody was excited because the liked my drawing.
So for that reason I love drawing when I make the other happy

AliMaraiJuly 201450% GOOD (2 votes)
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标题
- love drawing
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句子 1
- Today I drew a very beautiful picture.
  赶紧投票吧！
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句子 2
- Everybody was excited because the liked my drawing.
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句子 3
- So for that reason I love drawing when I make the other happy
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3