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ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΤΩΡΑ!Αδιόρθωτος

Κείμενο από ShirleyLin - English

  • Ghost

  • I was once a singer in the Temple of Thebes and died of melancholia in 800 B.C.
  • During these centuries, I became the mummy and was placed inside one of pyramids of Shepenmut.
  • People are always being curiosity.
  • Recently I was being operated since doctors found some marks of my body on the X-ray plates.
  • The doctors have been trying to find out whether I was died of a rare disease so the only way to do this was to operate.
  • Four hours passed, the doctors not only have not decided how I died, but they removed a section of my body and sent it to a laboratory.
  • They found a difficulty of the hard resin covered my skin though.
  • During the research, a small wax figure of the god Duamutef was found in the section of that.
  • To my surprise, the weird figure of that has not been shown on the X-ray plates.
  • By the time, the doctors have been confused about my body.
  • Before they cut my body open, they were worry about that I would fall to pieces.
  • But fortunately this has not happened, and I successfully survived in the operation.

ΠΑΡΑΚΑΛΟΥΜΕ, ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΚΑΘΕ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΗ! - English