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My personal industruction
Hello everyone, I´am 30 years old and life in Salzburg.
I work for an travel agency (TUI).
The job is demaning and I enjoy the contact with the costumers.
But the best think of my work is the traveling.
Tour operators invite travel agence to inform holidays - is realy nice.
I want to take my A-Level in English.
I would like to improve my English Skills and meet new foreign people of the whole world.
In my spare time, I like to go Zumba or jogging, anythink of sport ...

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- Hello everyone, I´am 30 years old and life in Salzburg.
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- I work for an travel agency (TUI).
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- The job is demaning and I enjoy the contact with the costumers.
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- But the best think of my work is the traveling.
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- Tour operators invite travel agence to inform holidays - is realy nice.
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- I want to take my A-Level in English.
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- I would like to improve my English Skills and meet new foreign people of the whole world.
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- In my spare time, I like to go Zumba or jogging, anythink of sport ...
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