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hi, I want to learn English to communicate with interesting people.
I am 28 years old, I live in Moscow.
I love to travel.
Help with learning Russian language) My skaep gremlin_gr

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句子 1
- hi, I want to learn English to communicate with interesting people.
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句子 2
- I am 28 years old, I live in Moscow.
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- I love to travel.
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句子 4
- Help with learning Russian language) My skaep gremlin_gr
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4