批改

從JennJenn來的文本 - English

My presentation
Hi everybody.
Today, I want to tell you more about me.
I love animals, in particular cats.
I have 5 cats at home: the younger is 5 and we found it outside, in the street.
The older is 15 but always young in his head.
I have other animals: a female rabbit, a snake and 2 birds.
You can guess I have a passion for animals.
I work in Disneyland Paris as a saleswoman.
It is a very interesting job, because I work with people from every countries.
For example, in my shop, my collegues are French, Irish, Spanish, Italian, Belgium, Swedish...
We met people from other countries every day.

标题
- My presentation
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi everybody.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Today, I want to tell you more about me.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I love animals, in particular cats.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I have 5 cats at home: the younger is 5 and we found it outside, in the street.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- The older is 15 but always young in his head.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- I have other animals: a female rabbit, a snake and 2 birds.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- You can guess I have a passion for animals.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- I work in Disneyland Paris as a saleswoman.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- It is a very interesting job, because I work with people from every countries.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9
句子 10
- For example, in my shop, my collegues are French, Irish, Spanish, Italian, Belgium, Swedish...
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10
句子 11
- We met people from other countries every day.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 11