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My weekend
Hello!
Today I need to tell about my weekend.
It was so tired because I went to my dad's house and then to the church, and finally I got out with cousin and watched a football game.
Now I need to rest too!

DanielOliveiraRJJuly 2014赶紧投票吧！
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标题
- My weekend
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句子 1
- Hello!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Today I need to tell about my weekend.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- It was so tired because I went to my dad's house and then to the church, and finally I got out with cousin and watched a football game.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Now I need to rest too!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4