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添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

JennJennからのテキスト - English

  • Have you ever been to Disneyland?

  • Have you ever been to Disneyland?
  • When I was a kid, I have been there so many times.
  • When I grew up, I bought an annual pass, to go there When I wanted. And now...
  • Now, I work for this amusement park.
  • To work here is amazing, and it is a wonderful experience.
  • We work with people from many other countries, we learn a few words of other languages, even if we do not use it when we are at home.
  • We meet so many people, each day!
  • And we are the ones who create the magic for our guests.
  • To make their dreams come true is a real job.
  • It is why I want to improve my English: to offer a better quality of service for them.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English