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First massage :D
I don't know what to write but i have to start somewhere.Okey.
I'm 14 and i love reading book.
In particular, I like to read fantasy books.
Example: Harry Potter, Percy Jackson, Darren Shan, Hunger Games...
I like playing tennis and football.
I am writing story.
This subject magicians andhalfbloods :D I'm listening All of me (John Legen) now and i love it. Good bye :D

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- First massage :D
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- I don't know what to write but i have to start somewhere.Okey.
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- I'm 14 and i love reading book.
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- In particular, I like to read fantasy books.
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- Example: Harry Potter, Percy Jackson, Darren Shan, Hunger Games...
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- I like playing tennis and football.
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- I am writing story.
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- This subject magicians andhalfbloods :D I'm listening All of me (John Legen) now and i love it. Good bye :D
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