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I learn English for 9 years
I am going to tell you some words about my family.
Well, I live in Moscow, in Russia with my mother.
My grandmother live in the Krim, my sister live in Moscow too, but dont with us, she lives with her husband.
My father lives in Tver, in Russia with his new family.
I somertimes go to he.
My aunt and ancle live in Great Novgorod.
I really love them all. Thats all))

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- I learn English for 9 years
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- I am going to tell you some words about my family.
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문장 2
- Well, I live in Moscow, in Russia with my mother.
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- My grandmother live in the Krim, my sister live in Moscow too, but dont with us, she lives with her husband.
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- My father lives in Tver, in Russia with his new family.
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- I somertimes go to he.
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- My aunt and ancle live in Great Novgorod.
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- I really love them all. Thats all))
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