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  • you will not learn from life if you are allways comfortable

  • I strongly encourage with idea that dissatisfaction and and hardship time make us stronger and help us to grow up, i can describe this following grounds Infact if we never go under difficult situation we cannot realize our maximum mental and physical power.therefore difficulties and obstacles puts us under spotlight to learn and improve ourselves and even if we lose and made mistakes we can learn from our mistakes and gorw up.and this is a process of progress to achieve success.All in all some famous person said that no pain ,no gain and i profoundlu agree with this statement.In addition dissatisfaction is a great experience that influence in our life.

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    • I strongly encourage with idea that dissatisfaction and and hardship time make us stronger and help us to grow up, i can describe this following grounds Infact if we never go under difficult situation we cannot realize our maximum mental and physical power.therefore difficulties and obstacles puts us under spotlight to learn and improve ourselves and even if we lose and made mistakes we can learn from our mistakes and gorw up.and this is a process of progress to achieve success.All in all some famous person said that no pain ,no gain and i profoundlu agree with this statement.In addition dissatisfaction is a great experience that influence in our life.
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