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從Rphoenix來的文本 - English

  • Winds of north

  • Winds are blowing from the north.
  • Bring that smell of ice and snow.
  • Call my heart to start a way.
  • Force my soul to be up there.
  • Winds are blowing from the north.
  • Lure my flesh to feel the cold.
  • Make my hand to stroke the snow.
  • Block all thoughts of inner world.
  • Winds are blowing from the north.
  • Giving chance to break the gloomy shell.
  • And freely watch the beacons - stars.
  • Up the sky in deepest night.
  • Winds are blowing from the north.
  • All the birds are flying north.
  • Soar skywards with nordic breeze.
  • Watch the ice of dark-blue deep.

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