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Hi, I'm Jennifer
Hi everybody, I'm here to improve my English.
So if someone can help me it will be great, just want to exhange some words from time to time with native.
Hope to read you Jennifer

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- Hi, I'm Jennifer
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句子 1
- Hi everybody, I'm here to improve my English.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- So if someone can help me it will be great, just want to exhange some words from time to time with native.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Hope to read you Jennifer
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3