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My name is Julia
Hi.I Julia, I'm 14 years old.
I'm trying to learn English 3 years, and now I would like to talk to someone my age in English.
I also want to learn German and French.

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- My name is Julia
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- Hi.I Julia, I'm 14 years old.
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- I'm trying to learn English 3 years, and now I would like to talk to someone my age in English.
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- I also want to learn German and French.
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