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從Baqir來的文本 - English

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Looking for English teacher
Hi friends , I'm Baqir from Iraq , I want to be so well in English , I can help to learn Arabic.
and I'd thank this site for this great Idea to learn.

BaqirAugust 2014赶紧投票吧！
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标题
- Looking for English teacher
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi friends , I'm Baqir from Iraq , I want to be so well in English , I can help to learn Arabic.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- and I'd thank this site for this great Idea to learn.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2