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  • Bird Observation

  • The graph shows the type of birds observed in Woodhuck county in winter and summer.
  • According to the graph, we see that people have seen bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles and vireos only in summer and they have never appeared in winter.
  • On the other hand, some kinds of birds, like juncos, have been seen only in winter and nobody knows where they live during the summer time.
  • There are other species of birds, which show up both in summer and winter, such as cardinals, crows and woodpeckers.
  • The people, who live in this region have claimed, that these birds can be observed in winter and in summer.
  • Researchers are wondering, where bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles and vireos spend their time during winter, because many local people have searched them in winter time and they've never found them.
  • So this winter, many observers have determined to find out if these birds migrate to other warmer places and also they will do the same for the birds, which never show up in summer, to see where they live during summer.

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    • According to the graph, we see that people have seen bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles and vireos only in summer and they have never appeared in winter.
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    • On the other hand, some kinds of birds, like juncos, have been seen only in winter and nobody knows where they live during the summer time.
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    • There are other species of birds, which show up both in summer and winter, such as cardinals, crows and woodpeckers.
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    • Researchers are wondering, where bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles and vireos spend their time during winter, because many local people have searched them in winter time and they've never found them.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
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    • So this winter, many observers have determined to find out if these birds migrate to other warmer places and also they will do the same for the birds, which never show up in summer, to see where they live during summer.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7