Korektoj

HELPU KOREKTI NUN!Ne korektita

Text from yando1 - English

  • Meeting

  • My story began when i parting whit my ex , i passed hard moment , whit passage the time everything change .
  • I forget her and I've changed my hairstyle i had a long hair and i dressed strange clothes , but now i have short hair and i dress differently .
  • I began to Delete people who do not know them in a personal account Facebook Suddenly , i saw pretty and nice girl , i messaged her , i told her "hello" she answered me .
  • I told whit her about a lot of thing , she's shocked me when she ask me about my friend , she Knew me , this is strange this happened i never met her but she knew me how ? .
  • whit the time she told me your friend his my old classmates , this is big surprise for me .
  • whit the time i knew her well , she was my friend , and she told me about her life , i forget my ex girlfriend .
  • i want told her i want to be my girlfriend , i can't tell her this , i still chatting whit her ..
  • the summer i passed whit her by chatting in Facebook , we told about a lot of thing , i spent great time whit her .
  • When they enter the school, I was sad because I do not like school.
  • But great surprise when I heard a voice from behind me , call me .
  • I turned around backwards and i saw her ,i can't believe and imagine , This day was the best day of my life

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Titolo
  • Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • I forget her and I've changed my hairstyle i had a long hair and i dressed strange clothes , but now i have short hair and i dress differently .
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • I began to Delete people who do not know them in a personal account Facebook Suddenly , i saw pretty and nice girl , i messaged her , i told her "hello" she answered me .
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • I told whit her about a lot of thing , she's shocked me when she ask me about my friend , she Knew me , this is strange this happened i never met her but she knew me how ? .
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • whit the time i knew her well , she was my friend , and she told me about her life , i forget my ex girlfriend .
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • the summer i passed whit her by chatting in Facebook , we told about a lot of thing , i spent great time whit her .
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11