Pataisymai

Text from stef1117 - English

  • Departure for New Zealand

  • Here, it is decided I will to travel in New Zealand from the 16 october 2014.
  • I leave for a working holiday visa.
  • Why I do it?Because I always dream to travel and discover an other country.I think the WHV visa is a very good idea to know the country and its inhabitants.
  • Why New Zealand?
  • Because it's on of the country who offering the Working Holiday Visa (as the Australia and the Canada).
  • But mainly it's a wonderful country, with his volcanoes, his mountains, his lakes and a lot of other amazing landscapes.
  • And moreover the people are welcoming.
  • I think it will be a great experience,and i could improve my English too.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English