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My journey
Hello !
I thank you to help me to perfect my English.
Today it's St Valentin in France.
It's the lovers day.
I'm so sad because I has'nt got husband.
I worked since 8 o'clock to 15 o'clock for ill persons at home.
It's sometime difficult and i'm tired when I go back at home.
I live in reunion island in indian ocean.
There are mountains and beachs.
It's beautiful.
People are multiraciale and there is a good feeling every where you go if you make it good.
I like reading, going to the cinema, hiding and make internet.
I like drink beer too.

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- My journey
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문장 1
- Hello !
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문장 2
- I thank you to help me to perfect my English.
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문장 3
- Today it's St Valentin in France.
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- It's the lovers day.
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문장 5
- I'm so sad because I has'nt got husband.
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문장 6
- I worked since 8 o'clock to 15 o'clock for ill persons at home.
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문장 7
- It's sometime difficult and i'm tired when I go back at home.
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문장 8
- I live in reunion island in indian ocean.
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문장 9
- There are mountains and beachs.
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문장 10
- It's beautiful.
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문장 11
- People are multiraciale and there is a good feeling every where you go if you make it good.
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문장 12
- I like reading, going to the cinema, hiding and make internet.
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- I like drink beer too.
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