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  • Studying with group of people

  • Studying is one of the key point through successfull career since the beginning of school life.There are 2 kinds of studying:Study with group of people or study alone.
  • In my opinion studying with group of people bring much more benefit than studying alone.While studying alone it s possible to lose attention,focus from the target of studying and playing games,watching Tv can take the interest rather than studying.
  • On the other hand the most important point studying with people is the members of the group should have similar levels,working rate and the members should be enthusiactic for studying.Sometimes even one person can break the peacefull athmosphere.It can cause waste of the time.
  • While working with group of people all can share each other’s knowledge during discussing the topics or for some cases if anyone need help for a topic others can explain where the student have diffuculties

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    • Studying is one of the key point through successfull career since the beginning of school life.There are 2 kinds of studying:Study with group of people or study alone.
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    • In my opinion studying with group of people bring much more benefit than studying alone.While studying alone it s possible to lose attention,focus from the target of studying and playing games,watching Tv can take the interest rather than studying.
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    • On the other hand the most important point studying with people is the members of the group should have similar levels,working rate and the members should be enthusiactic for studying.Sometimes even one person can break the peacefull athmosphere.It can cause waste of the time.
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    • While working with group of people all can share each other’s knowledge during discussing the topics or for some cases if anyone need help for a topic others can explain where the student have diffuculties
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