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Greetings.

Allow me to explain few things about myself, so you are able to understand what i am talking about.

I have two sisters.

Both of them are older than me, but I will call one of them my older sister, and second one younger sister.

So this is how it all goes.

My "older" sister is going on a vacation for 3 days with her husband, and they’ve got two cats.

Those two kittens can’t survive without food or water for that long, and stupidly my sister suggested that she and I will babysit them until they come back from their trip.

But, only place we can leave them in is an old shed.(+ we live in a city) And we can’t keep them in house because I am allergic on cats, dogs and rabbits fur.

After I somehow won a fight in which i had forbided her to keep them in a house we placed them in a shed.

She gave them milk and some bread to eat.

And all was fine until this morning when I went to give them something to eat.

The thing was, the moment i opened doors of shed they ran into our neighbours shed as they are on next to each other, and wood in between has started to rot away.

To tell you the truth I don’t give a damn about them.

And when my "younger sister" went to check up on them, she came frightened because she couldn’t find them.

She asked me where did cats go, as I told her that they are in our neighbour shed she started yelling at me, like it was my fault that they are there now.

I still don’t know what happened with them.

Right now all I want is for them to go away.

Leave in comments what do you think.

Should I care about solving a problem that isn’t my fault, or not.

That tip with " ’ " really helped me (Alt 0146) ,and I have noticed that you really insist on writing " I " instead of " i ".

There are no other words " i " that i know of, so why insist on something like that.

That " I " is troubling me, not because it is "harder" to write, but, how should i explain, it is like you are shouting or yelling and example of that would be SOMETHING LIKE THIS.

Is there some history to that " I " or is it that one of most used words in English language is somewhat "selfish" of "egocentric".

That is what I "feel " about it.

Maybe it is only me ( I hope so ) or maybe it really is like that.

Once again, thank you for correcting my entry.