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i want earn english langage
i always think.... how can ean english? in my class room i see my friends speak her fleunt. but me!!!!. now i'm trying to do this.
some one can give me tips?

ilyasokrimAugust 20140% GOOD (1 votes)
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- i always think.... how can ean english? in my class room i see my friends speak her fleunt. but me!!!!. now i'm trying to do this.
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- some one can give me tips?
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