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My Holiday
On this holiday, I visited my grandmother in the village.
I came there with my family.
After visiting my grandmother, I visited my other family member around the village.
It was really tired to visit their houses in one village but I was happy.
After visiting their houses, I went to my grandma's house and stayed there for 2 days.
Then, I went home to my city.

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- On this holiday, I visited my grandmother in the village.
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- I came there with my family.
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- After visiting my grandmother, I visited my other family member around the village.
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- It was really tired to visit their houses in one village but I was happy.
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- After visiting their houses, I went to my grandma's house and stayed there for 2 days.
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- Then, I went home to my city.
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